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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-01-31 06:49 AM



        
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Dancing minds


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In surrendering
to sleep
I entrap the light
of your smile
behind my eyes.
Then I play you
on the screen
of my dreams.
Your hands
reach for me,
fingers touch
neurons flash.
Thoughts merge,
diamond silhouettes
unveil hearts,
stunned into
breathless silence
by blinding
radiance.
We hear
each other’s song,
the harmony
of our one soul.
In rapture
we attune
to creation,
our bare beauty
in full sight.
With just one
pair of wings,
we dance
through the night
along the
infinite avenues
of our
blissful minds.

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[This message has been edited by Margherita (02-01-2008 06:39 AM).]

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-01-31 06:51 AM


Margherita!! you have me lost for words!! A most stunning write indeed my friend! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2008-01-31 08:09 AM


Magnificent!
What brilliance unfolds to the page, as your pure thoughts unravel to us.

simon
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3 posted 2008-01-31 08:45 AM


This does leave you feeling quite warm inside. Thanx...
Margherita
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4 posted 2008-02-01 03:10 AM


Thank you dear Roniece, Kathleen and simon for your generous replies!

love ... have a wonderful day!
Margherita

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2008-02-01 09:08 AM


Margherita~
Lovely
Lovely
Lovely~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Kahlil
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6 posted 2008-02-01 09:28 AM


Oh, Yes!!!  
poddarku
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india
7 posted 2008-02-01 10:17 AM


margharita, i am back. and,i am realising what i was missing:- the heart warming words of love that you love to write down and name it as poetry .


Earth Angel
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8 posted 2008-02-01 10:24 AM


I absolutely adore the opening lines. Your creative mind works like no other.

"In surrendering
to sleep
I entrap the light
of your smile
behind my eyes."

~ and I also adore the closing lines.

"With just one
pair of wings,
we dance
through the night
along the
infinite avenues
of our
blissful minds."

~ and btw, I also adore all the lines in between!

Simply captivating!!!

Love your pen and your spirit!

AT

HopeS
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9 posted 2008-02-01 10:50 AM


Such beautiful enchanting  visions captivated


Hope

passing shadows
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10 posted 2008-02-01 11:00 AM


wow! now that is BEAUTY!
Honeybunch
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11 posted 2008-02-01 11:30 AM


Yes, it is a beauty, Margherita.  I missed it originally but it was only meant for me to read it today so thank you.  Long sigh this side of the ocean!

Hugs
Helen  

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12 posted 2008-02-01 12:17 PM


Very Lovely Marghertia

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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13 posted 2008-02-01 05:10 PM


Thank you from my heart dear Poet friends for taking the time to read and comment so kindly.

love
Margherita

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14 posted 2008-02-01 08:38 PM


You make me smile.
This is beautiful.

A

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15 posted 2008-02-01 09:44 PM


absolutely  awesome pic as well as the words with it~ have missed your words~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2008-02-02 01:57 AM


I can feel it...James
Dark Stranger
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17 posted 2008-02-02 07:17 AM


ms mar, enjoyed the capture of rapture here
Gentle Spirit
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18 posted 2008-02-02 09:21 AM


Margherita, this is absolutely beautiful!!  Very much enjoyed your words here.  Hugs
Margherita
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19 posted 2008-02-03 12:38 PM


thank you everybody for the loving comments!

love
Margherita

The Lady
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20 posted 2008-02-03 09:49 PM



how your mind dances Margherita
beautiful...

Bobby Jordan
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21 posted 2008-02-03 10:08 PM


Margherita,

I don't know how I missed this one Hon.  It's truly beautiful.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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22 posted 2008-02-04 05:15 AM


Beautiful poem, Margherita.
                       Ida

Margherita
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23 posted 2008-02-04 01:56 PM


Thank you dear Kate, Bobby and Ida too for stopping by!

Dear Kate welcome back!! You have been greatly missed!

love
Margherita

miscellanea
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24 posted 2008-02-09 08:20 PM


Wow!  English is your third language?   Your poem is absolutely beautiful and magical, Margherita.  A keeper...  
Margherita
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25 posted 2008-02-10 03:44 PM


Dear Misc thank you so much! Yes, when I write I must be careful, I always fear that I say strange things (though I have a good ear ...), but I also use a German/English dictionary to verify words when I am not quite sure what they mean. I write better than I speak, but the worst is to understand others speaking English, especially Americans, when they talk fast!
love and hugs
Margherita

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