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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I love a gentle breeze that playfully skips around, shuffling the leaves and ringing the wind chimes as it dances around my head and whispers in my ear, secrets of exciting adventures and faraway places. After all, the wind has been ....everywhere. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely MarchMadness! ARCTIC WIND |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Marchmadness, Yeah, the winds been around. Good work on this poem. Bobby |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful, beautiful. lovely too. love the ending because it starts many stories here. "After all, the wind has been ....everywhere." |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine and pleasant 'write!' serious, sustained applause!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 I love it!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes it has...James |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
I love this too. So simple yet could go in so many directions... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for your interest and your lovely comments. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Delightful write, dear Ida! love Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautiful ! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
If only the wind could speak but it does, of course, if one listens. Enjoyed. Helen |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I love this one!!!!!!!!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 Ida, I LOVE the wind! I enjoy walking in a windstorm. ~ I'll even leave my windows opened just a crack so that the wind whistles through them.  ~ and I've had a love affair with wind chimes, my entire life. "and whispers in my ear, secrets of exciting adventures and faraway places. After all, the wind has been ....everywhere." ~ What a lovely thought! I adore this poem!!! Love and Whispering, Wailing Winds, Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all so much for reading and commenting. I read all of you, enjoy your efforts and look forward to each new poem. Ida |
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ilsm Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 61UK |
Short, but very enjoyable read. Thank-you |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Very simple but powerful verse. And afterall the wind has been everywhere so who better to share sharyn |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
now this is just nice...excellent write |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Ida, Ida say that you delightfully captured the essence of wind! I loved it! Just revisiting a poem that I find truly appealing. Love 'n hugs, Linda |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Imagination can be everything! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
you're talented Ida...Smile yann |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
One of your best, Ida! Each time I read it, I feel the "everywhere" wind tugging at my heart! Art |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Ida, this is fairy-like in it’s beauty… Tammy<333 |
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