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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-01-30 06:12 AM



downtown from remember
across the lover's blvd
on the other side of maybe
where it was ok to want to

I left your eyes there
on that glass table top
under the wishing tree
looking up for a god toy

while I ran back to nowhere
to pick up some excuses
why day dreams always end
but you smiled just before

and made me leave my keys behind
just by accident in your hands
so I returned with no reasons
in a bag of see thru plastic

that you pushed behind your lovely
__________

daark

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2008-01-30 06:31 AM


leaving with a smile...


all of your excerpts taste like a lick


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-01-30 06:35 AM


ms serene...a savoring perhaps...thanks lady friend
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-01-30 07:55 AM


mmmmmmmmmm..........yes Mr Daark    love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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4 posted 2008-01-30 10:59 AM


You know, I read this title before my eyes were fully open and I read it to be "cajones surgury" - no lie.  I like your title so much better ... and the rest?  Well, I am lickin' ... No, I meant liking.  Yes, I am liking it lots.

A

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-01-30 11:00 AM


Very Much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-01-30 08:44 PM


ms r &  b thank you ms for the read and smile

___________

ms ali...thanks babe for opening the other eye and reading it again..lol

______________

friend artic, thank you so much

Margherita
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7 posted 2008-01-31 05:56 AM


google search for your title asked : did you mean "cocajoe's surgery?" ...

any first read always leaves me confused

after the second read something dawns in my mind

and the third read brings magic into view


you are quite unique, dear D!

love
Margherita



Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2008-01-31 05:58 AM


I agree with you Margherita.. our Mr Daark is very unique!     I just came back to tag this one, it is lovely to the eyes!  love RDB  

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
9 posted 2008-01-31 06:09 AM


ms mar...no, sugerary..kind of a cajun term for sweet stuff place..anything you have a cravin for, is inside those walls..thanks lady friend

___________

Ms r & b....looks like the lady has a sweet tooth, thanks again ms

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