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soul drifter
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0 posted 2008-01-30 01:15 AM


Something About You

There's something about you
there's something in the things you do
when you walk on by
I feel that I might die
if I can't get next to you
if this dream can't come true

There's something about you
something irresistible in your every move
half the time I can't think straight
gotta get a hold on my mind
and the other half I'm only thinking of you
'cause you're too fine
so fine but not mine

Baby there's something about you
there's something there I find true
indescribable feelings tied to you
I wanna know the whole story
and I wanna know just what you feel for me
oh, there's just something about you

Tonight I'm writing songs
a little something about you
a little something for me too
hoping and wishing
you'll warm to this thing
this something called love

And you know I love everything
about you
Gotta tell you, there's something
something beautiful and true
about you

Oh baby baby
c'mon and get to this
ah yeah baby now
c'mon and give us a kiss
please just answer my wish

"Some rides don't have much of a finish;
that's the ride I took." --Gin Blossoms, '29'

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1 posted 2008-01-30 01:40 AM


Zach,

You made me smile as I read this celebration of feelings - and I was thinking what a great song this would be.

Alison

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