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Alison
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0 posted 2008-01-30 12:59 PM


Silver and gold woven like fine silken string
Creates spider webs with delicate sheen
Intricate strands that hang in mid air
Clings like magic in the times that we share

The gold is your heart, so strong and pure
Holding deep love that will always endure
Each steady beat whispers your story
Courage harmonizes your songs of glory

The silver is tears sliding down my face
Racing to fill this empty vast space
An endless abyss with no end in sight
Missing conversations shared into the night

Yet, hope still remains, although it grows dim
For without any hope there is no way to win
Darkness slowly gives way to a sliver of sun
With clarity I know that your time is not done

The gold is your strength and it is your faith
It’s knowledge you’re held in a loving embrace
You will never face your struggles alone
And the memories we share will never be gone

Silver and gold woven like fine silken string
Creates spider webs with delicate sheen
Intricate strands that hang in mid air
Clings like magic in the times that we share


...

Alison ~ to Cade

© Copyright 2008 Alison - All Rights Reserved
soul drifter
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1 posted 2008-01-30 01:20 AM


very beautiful and inspiring. love the title especially.

great, great work.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-01-30 06:07 AM


ms ali...a fine tribute lady!!..this is a love song.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-01-30 07:59 AM


you create magic everywhere my sweet Ali... love RDB xxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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4 posted 2008-01-30 10:59 AM


Very Inspiring Indeed

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-01-31 05:58 AM


quote:
The silver is tears sliding down my face
Racing to fill this empty vast space
An endless abyss with no end in sight
Missing conversations shared into the night



Deeply poignant and beautiful write, dear Alison!

love and hugs
Margherita

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6 posted 2008-01-31 06:05 AM


Lovely dear Alison and this:

"You will never face your struggles alone
And the memories we share will never be gone"

The mark of a sincere person.


Alison
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7 posted 2008-02-06 01:34 AM


soul drifter,

When I read your words, I smiled.  Thank you.

A

_______

DS

Thank you and thank you for understanding the 'why' behind the poem.  You have been a wonderful friend.

A

______

RDB

You have given me so much in this friendship that we share.

Thank you.

Ali

______

AW

Thank you.  You are a light on these pages.

A

______

Margherita,

I send you love and hugs -- and thanks for the smiles and kindness of you.

Alison
______

Helen,

I send my sincere thank you for reading and being so lovely in your responses.

Alison


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