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Like Cold Chains
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Like Cold Chains |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
When my words fall upon you like cold chains imagination is the master, and I am its slave If ever my mind repose upon anything with complete enjoyment – upon no person but you - I more believe you can have the least against me. But in the moment of the suns recline better shadows fill the empty space Therein you travel the utter dark till sigh relief when again my light you attract. Have I nothing else to love in you but that? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Good time, well spent. You inspire with your engaging verse. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I love your words here Robert, you write with such elegance and style... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"When my words fall upon you like cold chains imagination is the master, and I am its slave " great lines Robert...nice to read you again~~  M |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"Have I nothing else to love in you but that?" This almost has an Elizabeth Barrett Browning feel to it. Excellent poetry  Ruth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
impressive enjoyed this a lot |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Just lovely...very lovely. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Robert! Very Beautifully put, I enjoyed this piece as like the others, Enjoyed the Write  ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poems on love are whisper-soft and expressed ever so eloquently. "But in the moment of the suns recline better shadows fill the empty space"  Linda |
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