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Open Poetry #42

Been Waiting

zacubus
Junior Member

since 2007-09-08

Posts 32

0 posted 2008-01-29 03:16 PM

Welcome I am glad you missed the sign,
for now I have got you and  forever you're  mine.
So continue screaming it is music to my ears,
and you will be playing it for endless years.
Because this  is the place with no light or hope,
where even the mightest of men could never cope.
Where the ultimate terrors unfold,
and here you are without his hand to hold.
Yet you knew I was coming and  stand alone you do,
so to escape me now what plan have you.
To save you  it was told there is but one,
but you did not believe  in his only son.
So you can cry, plead and fall upon your knees,
but your soul has been given to do as I please.
And unlike him I care for you not,
so in store for you much torment I have got.
Where with great  pleasure your soul I shall destroy,
laughing as your agony  fills me with joy.
As you're consumed by the flames that ever burn,
for you are the lost and shall not return.
And  here you must stay in great torments and pain,
to never be loved ever again.

Devious Intellectual
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

1 posted 2008-01-29 04:44 PM

"To save you  it was told there is but one,
but you did not believe  in his only son."
My favorite line of the poem
Devil is tricky, different way of writing Christian poverty from looking at the devil point of view.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-01-29 05:28 PM

Welcome to pip Again lol

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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