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Jenna
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since 2007-03-20
Posts 180


0 posted 2008-01-29 02:42 PM


Even when you're in a crowded room
you picture only her face
and you won't be satisfied
until she appears
and then everything is right again.
When you're together
nothing else matters
you just want to be alone,
sharing in intimate moments
that exclude everyone else,
you plan your meetings
making sure you don't go a day apart,
chatting for hours
not taking your eyes off her face
you don't want to miss a thing.
Running off
to hide behind closed doors
you delight in being together,
the passion never disappearing
you can never get enough,
your lust for this woman is too strong
You just can't let her be.

Thirty years of marriage
and this woman who has you in such a spin
who lights up your world
and occupies your every thought
is not your wife at all.

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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
1 posted 2008-01-29 03:44 PM


Such a exciting beating of the heart. Such a shame it is not for the wife of thirty years. Who may be still looking upon her husband as her night in shining armour. The light of her life. His smile, his laughter. Oh what a delight in her eyes.

Hugs
BonBon

Devious Intellectual
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since 2006-05-08
Posts 112

2 posted 2008-01-29 04:29 PM


Felt the emotion and cant relate but feel the pain.  Sometimes things are left unclear but only the future can explanation be provided
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-01-29 05:38 PM


Good one! I thought, wow, an extraordinary couple ... but the disillusion came with the last words. Thirty years of marriage are a "high risk" factor!!!

love
Margherita

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