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Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06
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0 posted 2008-01-29 02:16 PM


I have it in my mind, complete
I could go on without
My eyes
My hands
Or feet
But if, from you,
I were to travel free
It’s a notion, sure,
To put an end to me


© Copyright 2008 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 2008-01-29 02:33 PM


How lucky this woman must be to inspire such beautiful words from you. I'm sure she feels the same
Ruth

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2008-01-29 06:30 PM


A great voice!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-01-29 06:32 PM


oh Robert this is lovely!   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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4 posted 2008-02-02 12:31 PM


Interesting.....

~~~kingsangel~~~

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-02-02 12:37 PM


Very interesting indeed

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-02-02 12:54 PM


I do believe that she must feel the same way about a man who could write an endearing poem such as this!!!


Linda

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