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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-01-29 06:11 AM



wrinkle wind afternoons
and you in black again
just breathing your seduction

pouring dark dreams into paper
leaving them unattended
for a stranger to sip

and wonder of your smile
how it would taste on mornings
before the sun added warm

you over your shoulder'd again
and caught my eyes admiring
assets and enchantments

as I prayed for slow motion
______________

daark

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-01-29 06:43 AM


and you know..... you take my breath away Mr Daark.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2008-01-29 07:39 AM


*thud*   lovely
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with you
3 posted 2008-01-29 09:48 AM


love it when you write like this...soft and sweet!
Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2008-01-29 11:19 AM


oh, so tender and passionate, the perfect combination to cause a sigh!

love
Margherita

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2008-01-29 12:06 PM


beautiful
Artic Wind
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6 posted 2008-01-29 12:42 PM


Lovely Dark Stranger

ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-01-29 06:16 PM


piploves you bless me with your touch..thank you for letting my humble words enter your days.
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