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Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2008-01-28 12:38 PM

you linger on my mind, a scent pervasive
clinging to skin and hair
and i feel you touch my face,
gently, tenderly stroking

i am enticed by you
i am happy to be held in your thoughts
when we are apart
but still wrapped around each other

i am always to be enticed
by you

you are a whisper caressing me
when asleep drowsy words sing me close
then wake me up with sensuous promise
as I drink coffee from a blue cup

that was held in the kindness
of you

---

Alison

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-01-28 12:45 PM

Ali.. although you are sad tonight, your heart words are very beautiful... just like you .. keep strong.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-01-28 12:54 PM

Fine writing...James

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-01-28 12:54 PM

Writing just kind of helps me work things out .. or share my thoughts with other speical people .. or brings me feelings of peace. You know what I mean too, don't you.

xoxoxox
A

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-01-28 12:55 PM

Thank you, James.

A

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2008-01-28 02:47 AM

An intimate sharing of your inner thoughts and feelings. I have this overwhelming urge to lend you an ear ~ and a shoulder.

Loving hug,
Linda

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2008-01-28 09:20 AM

"i am enticed by you
i am happy to be held in your thoughts
when we are apart
but still wrapped around each other"

*sighs*

this is so beautiful

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2008-01-28 11:49 AM

enjoyed

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2008-01-29 06:05 AM

ms ali, this is a tender gift, from a soft sided lady...enjoyed reading the romantica of you

jessie
Junior Member

since 2007-03-27

Posts 44
AUSTRALIA.

9 posted 2008-02-05 02:38 AM

nice.
enjoyed it from the start to end

simon
Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

10 posted 2008-02-05 06:32 AM

Really nice...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2008-02-05 07:18 AM

quote:
you are a whisper caressing me
when asleep drowsy words sing me close
then wake me up with sensuous promise
as I drink coffee from a blue cup

that was held in the kindness
of you

A delightful write, dear Alison.

love
Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

12 posted 2008-02-05 07:41 AM

Wonderful emotions here , my friend.

jwesley

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