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Alison
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0 posted 2008-01-27 10:58 PM


My friend is strong and he is forever my hero
He has fought a long and hard battle
and like a soldier, he has not quit
His body does not seem like his own

It has failed him, but my friend is strong
I can’t quantify what makes him a man
I can’t make you see him or feel him
or hear his voice or see his smile

I can only tell you that there is a man
- fighting to stay alive and he is tired
But, he has not quit
He is not a quitter
That makes him my hero and a fighter

When I think of him
I think of family and beaches and sunsets
I think of kindness and honor and dedication
I think of sunshine and sun tans
and waves lapping the sand

I think of my friend, Cade, and I am proud.

----

With love to you, my friend.

Ali


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-01-27 11:02 PM


Ali... I know you are hurting my friend... you write beautiful heart words here... thank you for sharing... I pray for strength for you and strength for Cade.. you are loved here on these pages blue.. love RDB xxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Alison
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2 posted 2008-01-27 11:58 PM


RDB

Thank you.  And thank you for sitting with me earlier tonight.

You are a beautiful friend.

A

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3 posted 2008-01-28 02:51 AM


What lovely remembrances of your friend. Your loving friendship will give him the added strength needed to fight his battle.

May a host of angels surround him with comforting, healing Light,

Linda

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4 posted 2008-01-28 10:23 AM


I hope you've shared this with him
it touches the heart...

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5 posted 2008-01-28 11:51 AM


Very poignant compassionate thoughts. I am sure he feels strongly sustained by your warmth and love.

So sad indeed to witness this change.

love and hugs
Margherita

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6 posted 2008-01-28 11:52 AM


enjoyed welcome to passions
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7 posted 2008-01-28 02:06 PM


You have shown well the value and the need for friends...James
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8 posted 2008-01-29 08:18 AM


Ali girl
I know your heart is aching and breaking,
I can feel you, honey
I love you
I'm here.

~Sheli~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

simon
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9 posted 2008-01-29 08:26 AM


So nice when words are used to express a real feeling. This is heartwarming & quite beautiful...
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10 posted 2008-01-29 09:06 AM


a very touching poem...welcome to Passions where you can express yourself as often as you like in words that touch the hear, words that make us reason or words that do both


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11 posted 2008-01-29 12:38 PM


New Name i am guessing! lol

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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12 posted 2008-06-04 11:35 AM


I just went to a benefit for a man with testicular cancer and he is so winning this war.  This poem made me think of him.  Thank you.
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13 posted 2008-06-04 11:56 AM


Alison  you are wrong ....I can see him and feel him ...through your wonderful poem ...so full of sorrow yet proud and full of love ....beautiful......I am sure you are a special friend for him too
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14 posted 2008-06-04 01:16 PM


Ali,

I had missed this one. I'm glad it was popped back to the surface.




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15 posted 2008-06-04 03:15 PM


Dear Alison such a vibrant hommage....

   yann

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16 posted 2008-06-05 08:36 AM


A~  I missed this before, so I am glad that it came back up.

and?  I miss you too, sweetie.

Hugs.  ~D

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17 posted 2008-06-05 09:29 AM


Sounds like a pretty special guy and you are a pretty special friend Ali. Take care. Steve


Robert E. Jordan
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18 posted 2008-06-05 03:25 PM


Dear Alison,

This is a lovely dedication poem.

Bobby

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19 posted 2008-06-05 03:48 PM


Prayers for you and for Cade, Alison - prayers of strength, courage and peace.  

- Owl

Alison
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20 posted 2008-06-05 04:13 PM


Thank you all.

Cade has died since I posted that poem; but he lives on in all who have loved him.

Alison

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21 posted 2008-06-06 08:47 AM


Words can not express the way this made my heart feel. I pray for your friends peace. I am so very sorry for your loss, and hope that he knew the love you had for him. Bless you!!!!!

[This message has been edited by K-K (06-06-2008 11:44 AM).]

Alison
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22 posted 2008-06-13 02:38 AM


K-K,

Hugs and kisses.

To all who have written to this thread.  You are all in my heart.  I am sending this link to Cade's father so he can see the out reach of kindness towards his son.

Love,
Alison

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