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Open Poetry #42

Confessions

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2008-01-27 05:46 PM

"I'll be there for you
On each step of the way,
I'll be strong for you
If you stay strong for me,
You mean the world to me"...

You've broken the promise,
And I... I forgive you.
But only I'd never tell,
So badly convincing myself
That I don't.
You've buried the world
You created for me
Next to my hope.
You've almost killed
My loving soul.
Almost...
Though you tried your best
You can't have injured me deeper;
You've left me a beautiful mess.

A heart, never whole,
Tears, alcohol,
Love songs,
All without an end.
I still try to pretend
I'm all right;
After one more sleepless night
Comes a new day.

New roads, new eyes,
Keys to new lives,
All ending up with new lies -
You're still recalled in my heart.
I try to find...You...
In a look of each stranger,
In every song...
You're only in other's hearts...
And in mine...
But you don't even remember me...
Who am I?
Not a missed memory,
Not a foe, not a friend.
Now I'm nothing to you.
Why? I don't understand...

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-01-30 03:15 PM

A Beautiful Disaster,

Not bad. This is coming along.

Bobby

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-01-30 03:19 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2008-02-02 11:28 PM

I like this one!!!!!!!!!

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

4 posted 2008-02-03 01:50 AM

well it is magical. but, need a bit of polish as you are a Better poet than this reveals.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2008-02-03 05:02 AM

It hurts when you can't burn the memory or the love away. Broken promises and broken hearts sting to the core. I hope relief comes soon.

Well said.

~alyssa

Hupomeno.

simon
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since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

6 posted 2008-02-03 06:51 AM

Really enjoyed the style of this...

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