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xrobxscottx
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0 posted 2008-01-27 05:25 PM



Stumbled into a world I will never know
In a time that I do not remember

Will you rescue me from this sacreligious expenditure?

I want to know what will become of me, in the times to come.

Will battle take my soul?

Will the constant beating of weapons against my mail finally give me way to the heavens?

Will I succumb to the power of those that are stronger than me?

Or shall I stand tall amongst the rest, holding my sword high?

The determining factor is you, and when all is said and done only I will know what you are thinking.

So come, foul beast. Strike at me so that I may try my best to defend, and counter your assault.

If you don't attack, I will.

"Love is attained not merely through the sight, touch, or any of the senses; but through time."

-Robert Wilson

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-01-28 05:01 PM


Interesting write.

If your sword is a sword of light, you will be victorious against any attack wherever it comes from. No need to attack first, just stand tall, I would say, and trust your own power.

love
Margherita

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