navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #42 » Inner Anguish Torments
Open Poetry #42
Post A Reply Post New Topic Inner Anguish Torments Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
HopeS
Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-01-27 10:33 AM



Inner Anguish Torments

I was wanting to write
Still I wonder what about
Since emotions inside
Keep refusing to flow out

The blank pages await
While emotions interplay
Agonising over turmoil
As I go through each day

Inner anguish torments
As despair beckoned me
No one needs to know
Tears I have shed silently

Searching without rest
My prayers shall continue
I find it hard to describe
What I was going through

HopeĀ©2008

© Copyright 2008 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-01-27 07:58 PM


Hope... these are beautiful heart words my friend... sending some special hugs  your way to smile you... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-01-28 08:08 AM


quote:
The blank pages await
While emotions interplay
Agonising over turmoil
As I go through each day



This is a very intense write, dear Hope, that makes me want to reach out with a big hug too.

May the tears release the tension.

Love,
Margherita


TomMark
Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
3 posted 2008-01-28 03:44 PM


sad. but beautiful!! poem is always a huge container of sorrow.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2008-01-29 12:56 PM


yep, I sure know what you mean

I'm having the same issues


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #42 » Inner Anguish Torments

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary