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Open Poetry #42

Talk Against Time

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-01-26 11:04 PM

  Talk Against Time

sunset Winter forests…

moon over broken
  mountains…

trackless midnight
   seas…

limpid stars astray
in the cosmic void…

talk against Time!

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2008-01-26 11:18 PM

And universal love。

have a good Sunday, dear Bruce。：）

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-01-28 07:25 AM

Bruce, I enjoyed the 'relative temperature' contrast between yours and TM's:

Bruce: "beyond barren hills
the last lonely cloud dances
in a cold sunset"

TM: "Above Wilson Peak
The first evening star twinkles
Fresh pink gets glittered"

Here is my 'time nightlight':

Ignore thoughts of time.
Golden candle light flickers.
Moonbeams are dancing.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-01-29 06:11 PM

quote:
limpid stars astray
in the cosmic void…

... and time ceases to exist.

Love it!

love
Margherita

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

4 posted 2008-02-07 11:04 AM

This was Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-02-07 11:06 AM

Very Descriptive SHDP

I loved this one

ARCTIC WIND

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

6 posted 2008-02-07 02:56 PM

Oh !! How did I miss this one?
Greatly enjoyed!

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

7 posted 2008-02-07 04:02 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

It's been awhile since I was able to see the stars. I know they are out there. I'll have to wait until I drive out into the country at night.

Good description.

Bobby

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2008-02-07 06:43 PM

good read

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

9 posted 2008-02-09 08:02 PM

loved the title on down! Nice imagery.

miscellanea

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

10 posted 2008-02-11 06:55 AM

Talk about good! minimalistic with impact, what a combination......

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