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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-01-26 05:48 AM





yes, your pen has found me
waiting for your mornings
me, sitting at your windows
yearning for the shadows

your eyes lay in the dawn-ness
savouring the smiles of the day
longing for a shimmer touch
as you wait for the warming glow

With no guarantees it will work
just perhapsing outloud...  



Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2008-01-26 07:02 AM


ms r & b, you have been missed, I enjoyed your soft side here
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-01-26 07:06 AM


always nice to be missed by you Mr Darrk on such a sad day here on the pages blue...

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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3 posted 2008-01-26 10:22 AM


I love this!


simon
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4 posted 2008-01-26 10:34 AM


Fantastic...!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-01-26 05:31 PM


thank you Dixie my friend and Simon for your lovely replies... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-01-26 09:08 PM


Lovely...James
TomMark
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7 posted 2008-01-26 09:14 PM


very touching. and it is beautiful.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2008-01-27 05:09 AM


thank you James and Tom... I appreciate your comments... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

secondhanddreampoet
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9 posted 2008-01-27 06:23 PM


I am especially fond of:

"sitting at your windows
yearning for the shadows"

applause!

Bobby Jordan
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10 posted 2008-01-27 06:49 PM


Roniece,

This is lovely in a strangely odd way.  I’m still savoring it.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2008-01-27 07:42 PM


thank you Bruce, thank you Bobby... your comments are valued... ooh I think I just got your 'strangley odd' comment too Bobby...   ok, no, not really but I am savoring it! x

love RDB


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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