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Open Poetry #42

Tuesday Morning REPOST

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-01-25 07:48 PM

Wakening lighting,

Storm heading this way,
Today,
Beautiful Tuesday morning
Tuesday morning turns into a
misty day,
tuesday morning,
Just wandering around
the beating of a clock
Heading to the road
to path
To find such luck,
Where I can find myself
In a dream,
tuesday Morning,
Where can I sse a open sky
With the morning light,
Tuseday morning
Light to the nights of Tuesday
Ready to take one step to another,
For a penny of a good luck charm,
In my life,
Monday has gone,
With such sweet sorrow,
Looking for another tomorrow,
When it comes to an open road,
To walk in Tuesday Morning,
Back to the tracks
of I listen EVERY SONG
In Tuesday Morning
Coffee drinking will warm up
my mind,
Blowing winds,
To this country side,
Where love was never found,
And in the cirlce 's of round
of Tuesday morning,
Singing each word
where loves hide away
In quick hour
of this tuesday morning,
Tuesday morning.....

[This message has been edited by vandana (01-26-2008 11:28 AM).]

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-01-26 09:24 AM

Vandana,

This would be much improved by not capitalizing the first word of every line.

Then you could capitalize the word "Tuesday" and make it stand out more.

Days of the week should always be capitalized anyway.

Bobby

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-01-26 05:57 PM

Enjoyed...James

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2008-01-26 06:03 PM

"In my life,
Monday has gone,
With such sweet sorrow,
Looking for another tomorrow,
When it comes to an open road,
To walk in Tuesday Morning,"

~ Keep singing ~ and walking! ~ and love is sure to find you again!

Have a happy Tuesday!

Loving hug,
EA

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2008-01-30 08:09 AM

sounds like you were feeling the tuesday groove
nice

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-01-30 11:01 AM

I love Thursdays and Sunday nights

ARCTIC WIND

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