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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Dream Patches Listen to the Summer moon singing for the rolling sea… Taste all the colors huddling in the mists of an ancient Autumn forest… Keep company with the clear Winter stars… Feast on the scent of the first Spring rain… they ask for nothing! Attempt not…to count the sand grains on the 'shores’ of life; the thunderheads hanging in an endless sky; nor the rain-tapping drops on your window panes… for we have enough enumerations. Do not try to pace and ‘package’ the wind nor the sunlight … for we have sufficient commodities. Simply slice off a cloud... (to patch your wounded dreams) and let in more light, from the grand cosmic void of Nature’s lucent ‘truths,’ to illuminate this darkling world! ~ [remembering Seymour (from whom I drew fine inspiration!)] ~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Attempt not...to count the sand grains on the 'shores’ of life;" and "Simply slice off a cloud" BRAVO! Outstanding lines! |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
simply wonderful!!!!!truly wonderful write. Thank you for the fine poem. have a nice weekend, dear Bruce. Tomtoo |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet. Not too bad. I don't do wounded dreams. If they are not realized, they are forgotten. It's as simple as that. I'm shallow that way. Bobby |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Bruce Simply slice off a cloud... (to patch your wounded dreams) I think this is beautiful and a poem all in its own. I think you created a smile on the face of a very fine man. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bruce... your beautiful words are heard I'm sure from above... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
In a world of few good surprises -- this is marvelous: "Simply slice off a cloud... (to patch your wounded dreams)" What a fine write! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Not a bad way to be remembered, We should all be so lucky. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very very beautiful, dear Bruce! Dear Seymour's soul must be dancing by now with all the love and beauty sent out to him. love Margherita |
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