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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-01-25 03:52 PM



it is as the leaves have penned me
stories of your voice on mornings
when you come to the window sides
and look for shadows of dreams

my eyes too are there in dawn skins
waiting to know the flavor of your smile
to know the smooth of your shoulders
when you bathe your wanting in warm

my hands are at the hammer stands
pounding out metal sounds in oil
the wet voices of partial healing
when only all of your secrets can heal

I am the white hound of winter then
panting at the blush of your fires
you are the dancer of candles on glass
tempting with your perhapsing hesitations

the eyes of this thirsting heathen

_____________

daark

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with you
1 posted 2008-01-25 03:55 PM


makes me think...



never mind....

really enjoyed this


Artic Wind
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2 posted 2008-01-25 03:56 PM


very Much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-01-25 03:58 PM


ms suesea, I like how you think, thanks babe

___________

friend Artic, thank you for the read

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4 posted 2008-01-25 04:17 PM


"the wet voices of partial healing
when only all of your secrets can heal"
Nice lines, Mr Dark!

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-01-25 04:26 PM


ms midnite, thank you so much
TomMark
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6 posted 2008-01-25 04:27 PM


beautiful. Love
you are the dancer of candles on glass
tempting with your perhapsing hesitations

Tom

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-01-25 04:53 PM


TomMark, thanks my friend
Sunshine
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8 posted 2008-01-25 04:53 PM


I've been dreaming a lot lately,
but not as beautifully as this...


Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-01-25 04:55 PM


ms sun, you make dreams, thanks lady friend
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10 posted 2008-01-25 05:20 PM


Lovely!
Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2008-01-25 05:29 PM


ms Clang, thank you for your eyes here
Margherita
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12 posted 2008-01-25 06:22 PM


You sip at a beautiful source of inspiration, dear D., and in your turn you inspire with your beautiful words.

love
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2008-01-25 06:31 PM


ms mar, thanks lady friend, you make me smile
Earth Angel
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14 posted 2008-01-25 07:20 PM


"waiting to know the flavor of your smile"

~ Dark One, I doso enjoy the way you express your desire for a kiss.

You be a Tantric lover, to be sure...


EA

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15 posted 2008-01-25 08:56 PM


Some things are just special

Ice cream on a cold day
A flower in full bloom
Shared secrets with special friends

and a poem like this.

This is special.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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16 posted 2008-01-26 12:53 PM


I very much enjoyed your beautiful heart words Mr Daark... the smiles you bring are precious.. thank you

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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17 posted 2008-01-26 07:06 AM


ms EA, shhhhhhhhhh I am not that tan at the moment..thanks lady

________________

ms az, thank you babe for reading and touching the inside of it.

________________

ms r & b, thank you lady friend, I appreciate your eyes

Angel4aKing
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18 posted 2008-01-26 03:04 PM


"my eyes too are there in dawn skins
waiting to know the flavor of your smile"

That smile again, and the waiting,.....for the flavor is much too sweet, sweet stranger....

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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19 posted 2008-01-27 06:53 AM


ms king, thanks for the touch there
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20 posted 2008-01-27 10:34 AM


You are not only a dream maker,
but you bring the sweeetest of dreams
a gal could ever dream..

oh..what images  

Oh YES I do love this one darkdaddy.

Dark Stranger
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21 posted 2008-01-27 02:44 PM


thanks ms GS...you smile me
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