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A Fistful of Rhymes...
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A Fistful of Rhymes... |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
It's a long, hard trail to Whitmore Reans. A land of oblivion, hopes and broken dreams. A long way to come to re-enter, the scene of adventure, Wolverhampton Town Centre, the last cowboy had come back to make one last stand. This was home turf, the place of his birth, he used to hold this town in the palm of his hand. His spurs clinked the ground as he wandered around, six-two in his stetson and boots. The hero of stories that they're telling still from Gornal Bank to Brierly Hill was back in the place of his roots. But now times was hard and the local town's bard was singin' a quite different story. He was lookin' for that one more last chance, that ultimate stance, a final blaze of glory. Time weighed him down and he no longer found, anyone who could remember, a time that everything that he did made every young kid, wanna ride with him (as a posse member). Was he now just a spent force? That had just run it's course? He thought as he tied up his horse that he might soon have to turn into glue. He needed a drink and some time to think about what he was going to do. He found a saloon called 'J.D Wetherspoon' he opened the door and walked through... TO BE CONTINUED... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
and?  keep going... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"he tied up his horse that he might soon have to turn into glue"  ~ Oh, nooooo! Save the horse and please continue your story!  EA |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Sea & Earth Angel Thank you for your replys, I am so grateful to people for just reading ( I appreciate it's quite long & tiresome) let alone replying to this or anything. I am working on a sequel if only for my own amusement, (no plans for any violence, let alone anything to horses...) |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ok... well I went searching for this as I read your one in Open #42 and saw that it was part 2!! doh, I'm blonde like that!! can't wait to read the next installment Simon - you write exceptionally well...love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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