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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-01-24 08:58 PM


Pineapple Fields Forever

One of my friends
told me that when the sun
rises over the pineapple fields
you can hear angels
singing "Hallelujah,
glory to God in the highest
and on Earth, peace and
goodwill towards men."
Being a believer
and wanting to hear
some angels singing
I went to the pineapple fields
early the next morning.
I didn't hear the angels singing
but standing in the middle of
a pineapple field I viewed
a glorious Hawaiian sunrise.
Now, if only I could
sample one...

JamesLee
25January
2008



[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (01-25-2008 03:03 PM).]

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Artic Wind
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1 posted 2008-01-24 09:05 PM


Very Much Enjoyed JamesMichael!

ARCTIC WIND

Bobby Jordan
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2 posted 2008-01-24 09:12 PM


James,

Aren’t you a Boy Scout?  You should be prepared.  Next time, take a knife with you, and cut yourself one of those pineapples.

I’m not a Boy Scout either.

Bobby

passing shadows
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3 posted 2008-01-24 09:19 PM


me too James

me too


Margherita
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4 posted 2008-01-25 08:06 AM


Wonderful vision, dear James.
I love pineapples too and sunrise in Hawaii must be quite the GLORIOUS experience that deserves a "Halleluja".

love
Margherita

Clang
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5 posted 2008-01-25 09:18 AM


Great write...P.S. is the year correct?
simon
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6 posted 2008-01-25 09:27 AM


James, loved this & loved the title...
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2008-01-25 03:06 PM


Thank you Artic, Bobby, passing, Margherita, clang and simon for the wonderful responses...I corrected the date...James
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