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Finest Hour
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Finest Hour |
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tonyV Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 36 |
Finest Hour This is my screaming expression, for your eyes an invitation to my depression. Witness my verbal cry, it's quite loud defeaned will be the nearby. Explore my words of passion, not too brute merely words, drenched in fashion. Letters infused with rage, a burning flame continues my poetic rampage. No peace in this verse, deep sea tears careful, before you submerse. Possibly my finest hour, breathe my words make sure you do not devour. No stillness to be found, always in motion no longer on life's mound A voice drunken with emotion, losing my grip remember, my artistic devotion. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is awesome, and sounds so cool when you read it out loud.  |
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Kamelian Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 21Australia |
"Deep sea tears" & "a voice drunken with emotion"... very powerful! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WELCOME TO PIP ARCTIC WIND |
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