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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2008-01-23 07:15 PM



Memoirs of a Pole Dancer

Giddy-up garb, she flaunts the stage
A gypsy rose, on long limbs wage
Bend fore and aft the traveled eye
Attired in scant silken shy
From stem to stern
Sweet scents to yearn
A different colored toss each turn
Bump to the East, Grind to the West
A siren’s song leaves to attest
Fine lines in vivid draws the bee
Seeking her pose so breathlessly
A flower to pick, and still to preen
Hibiscus dance the poles serene

Copyright Kkh 1/23/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-01-23 07:58 PM


loved this!
icequeen
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2 posted 2008-01-23 07:59 PM


WOW T.D.!!  Love love love that title, and the rhythm of this is great. I'm so happy to see something of yours come up tonight when I have a chance to come and read at PiP. Fabulous piece of work!

~Caroline~

Bobby Jordan
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3 posted 2008-01-23 08:09 PM


ThisDiamond,

This is very good.  My girlfriend used to dance, now her granddaughter’s dancing.

Two fine, and beautiful ladies.

Bobby

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4 posted 2008-01-24 01:17 AM


TD

What can I say?
I love this.

A

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-01-31 05:54 PM


lol Enjoyed .....

ARCTIC WIND

Earl Brinkman
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6 posted 2010-09-01 12:00 PM


The title drew me in and the poem lived up to its expectations.
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7 posted 2010-09-01 12:33 PM


Wow! What part of Poland is she from????
ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2010-09-01 06:28 AM


Thanks very much...LOL Balladeer...
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