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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-01-23 06:43 AM


this island of blue bamboo
like a lady in velvet
she seems to drift my sea

the long ships are restless
for the frothing of morning
but my soul still lingers

at the fingers of the helm
for a whisper perhaps from hades
to stir my sail skins of male

arousal of a mistress wind
with bosom bow she is jaunty
bruising my shoulders she yearns

to spend me in the pyre of sirens
___________

daark

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TomMark
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1 posted 2008-01-23 12:15 PM


This is beautiful.
One of my favorite of yours.
beautiful.
Tom

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2 posted 2008-01-23 12:15 PM


Now that is how the sea should be seen by everyone, then we would all have a smile on our faces.   Loved it!  I won't be looking at the ocean the same again, or bamboo in the wind either.
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-01-23 05:52 PM


friend Tom...thank you so much

___________

ms myst...thank you for the view of my view

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-01-23 05:56 PM


Beautiful words

ARCTIC WIND

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5 posted 2008-01-23 06:54 PM


ahh D, she is smiling and lingering in the velvet of your words.  You paint her here, beautiful.  Very much enjoyed the lovely...
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-01-23 08:29 PM


artic, thank you for the read

____________

ms gs, thanks lady friend

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7 posted 2008-01-24 02:08 AM


Again, I smile.

A

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-01-24 06:17 AM


ms az, your smile warms me..thanks babe
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9 posted 2008-01-24 08:46 AM


Oh, words to cuddle into!
Outstanding Dark one.

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10 posted 2008-01-24 05:15 PM


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhha....love it!
Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2008-01-25 06:04 AM


ms diamond, thank you lady

___________

ms suesea, thanks babe, for the touch and smile

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12 posted 2008-01-25 10:43 AM


the long ships are restless
for the frothing of morning
but my soul still lingers

at the fingers of the helm
for a whisper perhaps from hades
to stir my sail skins of male


I learned three new words here ... and the vision I get is very captivating.

love
Margherita

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13 posted 2008-01-25 12:23 PM


enjoyed
Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2008-01-25 03:41 PM


ms mar, thank you for watching this dance of tides.

_________

ms vandana, thank you ms

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15 posted 2008-01-30 02:07 AM


I return to the island of blue bamboo.  The words are lovely to just bask in.

A

Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2008-01-30 06:13 AM


ms ali..please stay here for as long as you wish to..thanks ms
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