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Magnus
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0 posted 2008-01-22 09:32 PM


Silk burns the skin of yearning lips, swirling, tempting the eyes of a blind
bearer....the smell of temptation wandering over the face, teasing one to
find but a moment to delve unselfishly into the waters of swirling breaths
where beauty lies dormant amongst the reeds.

Where shadows lure a damp fog into the whispering ebb of brine.  Where
life effortlessly finds a release of that which time holds against the bosom
of wantonness as wishful souls pray for that which binds them to allow
freedom’s reign to break the riderless horse as passion walks the dunes of
naked wisdom into the cool of a fading night.


We’ll see if this makes any sense....

© Copyright 2008 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-01-22 10:07 PM


Magnus-

you always have a great way with words!



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2 posted 2008-01-22 11:06 PM


yes you do, and I for one, have missed them. good to read you again~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

tonyV
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3 posted 2008-01-23 12:01 PM


As the above said, you really have a way with words.

Bravo.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-01-23 05:02 AM


oh yes, it made perfect sense to me Barry - very much enjoyed... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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5 posted 2008-01-23 10:20 AM


the imagery is wonderful...you have a way of creating a picture in the reader's mind


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6 posted 2008-01-23 07:57 PM



Great visual picture Magnus, enjoyed

Lindsay

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