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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 01-22-2008 06:45 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


I always did wonder of your evenings
when you put your mind there
in that other room of seclusion
by the window that looks away

when you picked a book's whispers
and let them wear your skin
as you would pretend behind your eyes
that you were the gypsy's pen

sometimes I was gravel outside
dragging my own feet for noise
so you would press to the glass
and bosom my eyes with searching

as you listened to the winds song
and the rustling of my leavery
wondering of a handsome prince
or perhaps even a wicked king

not knowing we were all in the shadows
___________

daark
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Margherita
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1 posted 01-22-2008 07:49 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

quote:
as you listened to the winds song
and the rustling of my leavery
wondering of a handsome prince
or perhaps even a wicked king

not knowing we were all in the shadows



Absolutely awesome, dear D.!

love
Margherita
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2 posted 01-22-2008 07:53 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

When the gypsy of you wanders it is such a beautiful thing.  Lovely write d.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 01-22-2008 04:53 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

as you listened to the winds song
and the rustling of my leavery
wondering of a handsome prince
or perhaps even a wicked king

not knowing we were all in the shadows

mmmm... a handsome prince OR a wicked king... can I have both please?   enjoyed this Mr Daark...  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

TomMark
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4 posted 01-22-2008 05:00 PM       View Profile for TomMark   Email TomMark   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TomMark

indeed this was a wonderful poem.
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 01-22-2008 05:02 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms mar, thank you lady friend for the touch and  smile.

_____________

ms gs, thank you donna for touching this one

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ms r & b, my my my....a threesome?  do you play?  golf I mean, thanks ms

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friend tom/mark, thank you sir for the read
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6 posted 01-22-2008 05:08 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

love it when you speak of gypsies...
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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  yes, I play left handed Mr Daark... but very very poorly!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 01-22-2008 10:36 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms suesea, thanks babe, they are my favorite spinners of gold

____________

ms r & b, I imagine your approach is sensual and that your short game is wickedly charming.
aziza
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9 posted 01-24-2008 01:30 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

This reads like a wonderful story - or a picture that is just out of reach but can be seen ... or like words that flow into a song.

A
icequeen
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10 posted 01-24-2008 01:51 AM       View Profile for icequeen   Email icequeen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for icequeen

Ok... one more fix before sleep. You have magic in you, Dark. Thank you for letting it out to breathe all that beautiful over us.

~Caroline~

P.S. - no one can accuse me of not inhaling  - no no no - I mean the beautiful!
Dark Stranger
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11 posted 01-24-2008 06:19 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms az, thank you lady!!, it is nice to have you along on my pendrizzle

___________

ms ice, thank you for taking a tour, your comments were a pleasure
Artic Wind
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12 posted 01-31-2008 06:05 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Yesssssss, Indeed, A fine lovely Write!

ARCTIC WIND
Dark Stranger
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13 posted 02-01-2008 06:23 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thank you artic..
Earl Brinkman
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14 posted 08-13-2010 08:43 PM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

I guess I would have to agree that the last stanza packs a wallop.
Dark Stranger
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15 posted 08-14-2010 06:27 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Thanks EB
Amaryllis
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16 posted 08-14-2010 02:20 PM       View Profile for Amaryllis   Email Amaryllis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Amaryllis

Such beautiful poetic architecture here.. loved this!
~Amaryllis
Dark Stranger
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17 posted 08-14-2010 03:11 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thank you much ms
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


18 posted 08-14-2010 09:40 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Yes, it's a good thing when
today's topics of the archives
reach back to the present...

for a present it is.

I like this very much:

quote:
when you picked a book's whispers
and let them wear your skin
as you would pretend behind your eyes
that you were the gypsy's pen



I like it...because I know.



Dark Stranger
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19 posted 08-15-2010 07:13 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thanks pretty sun...
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