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cosykayv
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since 2008-01-21
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0 posted 2008-01-21 09:01 AM



stop crying then you'll save me from dying

start lying, maybe i might believe you

forget her face, surely that can heal me

look at me, then i might show you how much i love you

give me time to learn...
how to set you free.

the maybe you can freely whisper
"i never loved you as much as you have loved me"

© Copyright 2008 chrisse streegan - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
1 posted 2008-01-21 09:04 PM


oh, how true. Sometimes life is just like this.
memories, shadows, self-lying and of course the hope for true love.

enjoyed your poem.
and a warm welcome to this wonderful place called piptalk and you may join us in other forums to talk about life.

Tom  

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-01-21 10:45 PM


WELCOME TO PIP

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-01-22 05:51 AM


"i never loved you as much as you have loved me"

ouch.. that's gotta hurt!

Welcome to our pages blue.. a great first post..   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

rugged_miss
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since 2007-10-27
Posts 26

4 posted 2008-01-30 05:28 PM


nice..
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2008-02-04 03:52 PM


Enjoyed...James
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