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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-01-21 06:34 AM

I knew you were balancing your lady
on the narrow edge of proper
keeping that delicate attention

so that crazy wouldn't take over
and unravel your favorite sweater
or scuff the toes of your shoes

I kept my thoughts to myself then
as long as I could stay silent
but I did draw pictures in the sand

outside your sometimes look out window
and waited for your eyes
to follow my imagination down

to the warm of our barefoot ocean

___________

daark

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-01-21 06:40 AM

so that crazy wouldn't take over
and unravel your favorite sweater
or scuff the toes of your shoes

smiles... yes well, crazy is close to taking over Mr Daark.. and my favorite shoes are close to being scuffed!! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2008-01-21 06:50 AM

ms r & b, thank you for looking out the window at this one.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2008-01-21 09:19 AM

"I kept my thoughts to myself then
as long as I could stay silent
but I did draw pictures in the sand

outside your sometimes look out window
and waited for your eyes
to follow my imagination down

to the warm of our barefoot ocean"

can't even express how much I love this or how deep this goes...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2008-01-21 05:31 PM

ms suesea, thank you babe for looking here

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2008-01-21 06:11 PM

awww this is beautiful D, as so can proper and crazy both be. Loved thisun' bigd.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-01-22 06:27 AM

quote:
I kept my thoughts to myself then
as long as I could stay silent
but I did draw pictures in the sand

You too show these two sides ... passionate, yet gentle, when she "hesitates".

A poem to cherish.

love
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-01-22 06:29 AM

ms gs, thanks lady friend

_____________

ms mar, thank you for the eyes ms

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

8 posted 2008-01-22 09:19 AM

This is quite beautiful and loving, Mr. D.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2008-01-22 05:03 PM

ms kahlil, thank you lady friend

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

10 posted 2008-01-24 01:12 AM

So, if the sweater unravels .. is that what it means to be hanging by a thread? (smiles --- I couldn't help myself .. I tried, I really tried. Kinda).

I am loving this, D.

A

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

11 posted 2008-01-24 01:40 AM

*sighs* ... and draws pictures in the sand with my scuffed shoes.

I can go to sleep now. I've got my Daark fix. The withdrawal never ended, you know.

~Caroline~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2008-01-24 06:21 AM

ms az, go ahead and pull it..I dare you..(grin) thanks babe

____________

ms ice, thank you for fixing me with your reply

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

13 posted 2008-01-31 06:01 PM

Fantastic!

ARCTIC WIND

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