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simon
Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

0 posted 2008-01-19 07:57 PM

I love to spend some time with sleep
Because he makes me feel like I can do anything
He won't stand for any simpering
About disabilities
Just concentrates
On capabilities
And on the possibilities
They might bring.

Not like the morning.
He's a stickler
For good time-keeping
He likes everything 'just-so'
And he hates to find me sleeping
When he comes tapping on my window.
And he's got no time for this fantastical dreaming racket,
I wake up & he's there
Holding out his strait-jacket.

And I object but I always try to keep him sweet
'Cause I'm only too aware
If I upset him
One day, he won't be there.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-01-19 08:08 PM

very nicely put Simon... I hope you have many more waking days to come

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-01-20 03:30 PM

Enjoyed...James

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2008-01-20 06:06 PM

there are a lot of capabilities that come with sleep and headaches that come without it...your ideas are nicely arranged

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-01-20 06:47 PM

When he comes tapping on my window.
And he's got no time for this fantastical dreaming racket,
I wake up & he's there
Holding out his strait-jacket.

Ah yes every new morning brings opportunities but also demands to get into action and not always in the field related to the realization of our dreams.

Great job!!

love
Margherita

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2008-01-20 06:56 PM

A little spooky, but well said....

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

6 posted 2008-01-20 08:36 PM

very good! what a delicate thing to please.
Tom

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2008-01-21 10:59 AM

What a unique and creative write! ~ and it had a certain charm to it, as well.

May your days be as sweet as your nights!

Love & Light,
EA

simon
Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

8 posted 2008-01-24 11:34 AM

I just wanted to thank everyone who not only reads my nonsense but who spends some of their own time actually commenting on it!

RDB: Thank you so much for your continuinng support.

JamesMichael: I am really happy when you tell me if you have 'enjoyed' something.

Ecrivan: Thanx, I hope your headaches are not too frequent.

Margherita: Thank you so much for your continuing support (as well)

Magnus: Thanx. You're probably right it is a little bit spooky but my head is sometimes. Good to know I don't always suffer alone.

TomMark: Thank you as always.

EarthAngel: Thank you so much, it's comments particullary like yours that make all of this worthwhile.

Thank you to everyone who has read & even more those that comment. They make me so happy... love you all...

Simon...

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