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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2008-01-19 04:16 AM


Step to the right, step to the left,
but you know it’s in the middle
where everything’s alright.

It’s like the mind decrees the feel
of what’s not me essentially
to make of the coming back
a daunting climb of will.

Let me whisper now the need
to stand as one aligned
with the centred meaningful
before the pillars crumble
and ne’er be built again.

There’s an urgency to whispers
heard in the dream of love
and in the shake and tremble
that follows in its wake
lest the left and right lean in
and suffocate the mind.

And you know I won’t be travelling
to make the middle known
but somewhere is the door
that leads safely through the mire
of the far away outside.

Step through and in one day, my friend
and then you’ll know how lovers feel
when minds and bodies co-exist
in the centre field of spirit needs!

Helen / 19 January 2008


© Copyright 2008 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-01-19 10:43 AM


and then you’ll know how lovers feel
when minds and bodies co-exist
in the centre field of spirit needs!


Dear Helen, you have touched true poetic heights with your philosophical ponderings here. That is indeed the goal that our bodies "keep in mind" and our minds wishes for "the body", perfect alignment.

You know the way!

love
Margherita

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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2 posted 2008-01-19 12:54 PM


beautiful poem and with philosophy.
enjoyed
Tom

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2008-01-19 02:40 PM


Thank you Margherita.  Yes, I do indeed know the way.

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2008-01-19 02:45 PM


Thank you, Tom.  Glad you enjoyed.  
"Beautiful" is a word I have been pondering on lately.  Is it what I see, or is it how I feel because of what I see?

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