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howardtsu
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0 posted 2008-01-18 04:02 PM


morgan :

                     Eve didn't like walking around the circular quay anymore

                     it used to be an “eyesoar”

                     but without Howard's store

                     filling her memorys with lore

                     her eye’s were too sore

                     for hi’s that used to soar

                     everytime she walked through Circular Quay with pies that Howard adored

jaimz :

                     that’s understandable

                     but what about Howard?

morgan :

                     well ….

                     Howard didn’t like walking around the circular way without Eve’s rapport either

                     he missed the way him and Eve use to admire the circular array of shops along the shore

                     you see neither of them expected that them meeting would give rise to their desire to explore

                                        the semicircular displays

                     that appeared everytime they shared a sunrise together

                     could you hand me that Skor?

                                           [handing it to him]

jaimz :

                     so then what happened?

morgan :

                     they eventually left the circular bay

jaimz :

                     why?

morgan :

                     no one knows

                     but it’s said that even to this day Howard can be found handing out romantic circulars

jaimz :

                     what do they say?

morgan :

                                                   what else?

                                                   [Jaimz nods]


                                                                                           love,

                                                                                           eve & howard





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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-01-18 07:32 PM


you see neither of them expected that them meeting would give rise to their desire to explore

                                        the semicircular displays

                     that appeared everytime they shared a sunrise together


You have a unique way to tell a story and I enjoy it.

love
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-01-18 09:38 PM


yes.... I always enjoy Howard's fine work indeed!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

howardtsu
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3 posted 2008-01-23 11:49 AM


thanks margherita

thanks roniece

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