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Felix The Thief

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Bobby Jordan
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0 posted 01-18-2008 12:49 PM       View Profile for Bobby Jordan   Email Bobby Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bobby Jordan

Felix is young and hungry.  
Heís walking down a side street
where thereís no traffic.  

Heís hungry.  

Felix is looking through car windows,
and testing each car door
to see if it will open.  

Heís hungry.

Felix is a thief.  
He doesnít feel bad about being a thief.  
Heís more concerned about being hungry.

Heís hungry

Bobby
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simon
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1 posted 01-18-2008 12:52 PM       View Profile for simon   Email simon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simon

There;s nothing left to say that I haven't already said...
TomMark
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2 posted 01-18-2008 01:11 PM       View Profile for TomMark   Email TomMark   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TomMark

Good.

and "moral shall never go in front of  hunger"
Tomtoo
Bobby Jordan
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Simon,

Thanks for the kind words.  Iím pleased you liked it.

Tomtoo,

Thatís exactly right.

The human body is holy and sacred.  It must be cared for and taken care of to the best of a personís ability.  It's an obligation.

Bobby
Margherita
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4 posted 01-18-2008 07:38 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Nothing needs to be added indeed, your words are impressive, dear Bobby.

Hunger is maybe the strongest drive that we can feel.

love
Margherita
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5 posted 01-18-2008 08:22 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

the powerful saga of Felix continues!...

...and so does the applause of an appreciative audience!!
Bobby Jordan
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6 posted 01-18-2008 08:43 PM       View Profile for Bobby Jordan   Email Bobby Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bobby Jordan

Margherita,

Isn't it though.  It can make you sick, and crazy.  I don't want to go there again.

Midnitesun,

Thank you so much for the very kind words.

Bobby
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 01-18-2008 09:36 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

I love your Felix stories Bobby, I truly do!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bobby Jordan
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce,

Thanks love, for the very kind words.

Bobby
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9 posted 01-19-2008 11:43 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Enjoy the Felix stories very much.
                           Ida
Bobby Jordan
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Ida,

Thanks for reading them, and I glad you enjoy them.

Bobby
Earl Brinkman
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Felix struggles may be heartbreaking but they are enjoyable to read.
 
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