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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
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Ireland

0 posted 2008-01-18 05:42 AM



The blue moon weeps for company
Alone on his night watch he surveys chasms of emptiness
Void of love
Void of contact
Alas not even dreams come to visit
What is the use in shining in the darkness?
“No one appreciates him any more” the moon seethes
Well the human heart is struggling to find hope as it is
What if I stop shining in the cold embittered night sky?
Let the blackness encapsulate their entire being for the world has lost its soul

However the moon tortures himself and struggles from within
Seeking a reason for living
A reason for existing
Realisation strikes to its very core
The path is narrow and long and without the bright beacon of light then their would be no point to it all
Sighing with relief and purpose
The moon sparkles into every windowless alleyway and puddle of tears
This time love will conquer all from within………………………………

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2008-01-18 09:33 AM


    



You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

simon
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since 2008-01-14
Posts 440
London, England
2 posted 2008-01-18 09:53 AM


wow. I like this as it's quite haunting & stirring. & not a single mention of Man City! Which is always good.
TomMark
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3 posted 2008-01-18 12:43 PM


beautiful poem. And ARH's picture added another tune to it.
Beautiful indeed.
enjoyed all
Tomtoo

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-01-18 02:19 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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