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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2008-01-17 06:26 AM





Eyes to Eyes

Still remember when first we met,
when eyes touched eyes in warmth of flow.
For there you were, as imagined once,
tempting lips to share their know.

I felt it true in hands that met
and held that moment, reflecting now.
How then I wished I knew the "next",
my heart in want to you allow.

There you were the perfect dream,
the pleasure missed, in solitaire.
I left behind what could have been,
what should have been my answered prayer.

It echoes now, this heart of mine,
the loneliness that you could fill.
The calling of a Knightful love,
the missing words, the touch to thrill.

So I sleep upon a dream
that lays a smile upon this face.
Knowing that some day will find
eyes to eyes in warm embrace.


          ~~**~~


My thoughts in time to remember whence,
eyes of mine searching from head to toe.
We met once again, for the second time,
lips touched and asked, what did we sow…

Your hand was warm in pleasures touch,
memories are always of when we met.
My heart beat quicker not knowing of,
that inside your breast, I, would you let..

Dreams I have now real in retrospect,
and yes, pleasures missed, to be one.
To embrace we could, but to this alas,
reflections have I, why this not done…

Understanding inside, yet driven at times,
desiring of you, and know now your thought.
If known I would then, when hearts beat so,
to take the night, but now for naught…

I still sleep with dreams, which come forth,
of your lips traced slowly, not in haste.
Inside I find though these restless wants,
of eyes to eyes in warm embrace…  
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.
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nakdthoughts/Bill Charles


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-01-17 06:47 AM


I have not yet read it, but your name together with dear Bill Charles gave me goosebumps ... wow wow wow!
now going to read ...
love to both
Margherita

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2 posted 2008-01-17 07:02 AM


Eyes to eyes in warm embrace

... ahhh, there is such a flow of wonderful emotion in your duet, dear Maureen and dear Bill (how we miss you!).

You have created a highly touching duet and I can only say that your hearts and souls have expressed their truest feelings so very beautifully, that I do wish you both to realize your innermost desires.

I can't say how pleased I am for both of you and for us here! Thank you both.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2008-01-17 03:12 PM


Margherita, thank you for your kind responses. Although a duet, and although we met in real, it was fun to make the poem
seem more than what it is (I hope  that is clear

M

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-01-17 04:37 PM


... you have succeeded so well! I think it is perfect!


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5 posted 2008-01-17 05:02 PM


This was wonderful.  Great job to both of you.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-01-17 05:15 PM


Wonderful...James
SmartChick
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7 posted 2008-01-18 05:18 PM


This is absolutely beautiful. You tow write well together.
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8 posted 2008-01-19 11:00 AM


Maureen...Great poem from the two of you.
I spoke with Bill on the phone a few years and we talked about me visiting him after he moved to B.C. but never did get to meet each other...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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9 posted 2008-01-19 11:40 AM


M.  I think we all miss BC from time to time.

Well written dear friend.  could fool most
all of us with this one.

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2008-01-20 07:03 PM


Thank you for the kind responses. It is always a pleasure to share thoughts with Bill and I am hoping he will rejoin us with some poems in the  near future.

Thank you BC for being who you are ~~


M

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