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Frances The Mute
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since 2008-01-09
Posts 16
CT, USA

0 posted 2008-01-16 10:06 PM



It doesn't ever shift,
It doesn't ever move,
Droplets start to trickle,
Droplets start to soothe,
It is always shifting,
It is always moving,
Droplets aren't calming,
Droplets aren't Soothing,
It will never shift,
It will always move,
Droplets still can trickle,
Theres nothing left to soothe.

"There is a beast in man that needs to be excersised, not exorcised."

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2008-01-17 10:03 AM


Theres nothing left to soothe.

Oh I understand this very well...cry and cry..heart is broken and it goes numb...destroyed and there is nothing left to soothe the ache...

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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