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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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0 posted 2008-01-16 10:03 PM



Little black hair band
snaps away from my fingers.
Pony tail runs free!


011608ha.

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2008-01-16 10:05 PM


giggle

Kamelian
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since 2008-01-14
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Australia
2 posted 2008-01-16 11:48 PM


Great!
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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LA,CA
3 posted 2008-01-16 11:54 PM


very good. I like Haiku.
Tom

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2008-01-17 12:09 PM


I came home dog ass tired
looked at the title of the poems here
and thought -- It all sounds depressing.

Thank you.
You made me smile.

A

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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5 posted 2008-01-17 03:35 PM


This is just such a smile, e.

refreshing!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2008-01-17 05:42 PM


love that feeling~~

M

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