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Frances The Mute
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since 2008-01-09
Posts 16
CT, USA

0 posted 2008-01-16 05:32 PM



Walk the yellow line,
Hope to god you don't get hit,
One more time before,
Were over and done with it,

Cause theres no way in hell,
Or heaven for that matter,
That were worse alone,
And better together,

As i think of the words,
Force them from my mouth,
We pile into your car,
Begin our journey south,

And i'd love for it to be,
Just this way for a while,
Analyzing the crime scene,
That you call a smile.

"There is a beast in man that needs to be excersised, not exorcised."

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Clang
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since 2005-12-15
Posts 222

1 posted 2008-01-16 05:35 PM


I thought this one very unique and full of imagry.  Good write.
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