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xrobxscottx
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0 posted 2008-01-16 12:25 PM



Suspense
The thrill
The bump
The chill
The carnage
The cancer
The cold blooded answer

The constant pounding
Upon my door
The constant sounding
Forever more

Cloudy intro
Opposite out
I throw myself into you
With a scream and a shout

You cascade down from the heavens
To adorn me with shades darker than my few
You put out the flames that spiral in dark sevens
That stay alive because he blew

One simple color defines you
One simple monotone
Add a shade opposite the hue
And for sure emits you a moan

Say you to what am he?
Say it,
Say it,
Will you to me?
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So, it's a poetic riddle. I thought I would post it here and see if anyone can figure out what it is that I was talking about.

Have fun!

"Love is attained not merely through the sight, touch, or any of the senses; but through time."

-Robert Wilson

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xrobxscottx
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1 posted 2008-01-16 11:28 AM


haha, no one wants to try and guess?

:P

"Love is attained not merely through the sight, touch, or any of the senses; but through time."

-Robert Wilson

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