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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-01-15 09:12 PM


  Winter Dreams

Mid Winter's
shadows,
a radiant moon
of perfect clarity,
dances on this
mystic river…
purifying our
dreams of
Spring!


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1 posted 2008-01-15 09:34 PM



Cold winter nights often trigger dreams of Spring.
Nice imagery, as always from your pen, Bruce.

Kahlil
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2 posted 2008-01-15 09:43 PM



Yes! The moon WAS gloriously radiant, dancing on the water
at dusk today. And I thought happily of spring.
You are one with nature, poet man.

A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2008-01-15 09:47 PM


oooo...loved this winter Dream~

you know I am the Dreamweaver~

~HUGS ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

TomMark
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4 posted 2008-01-15 11:33 PM


Beautiful! Mystic river, ah, has the poet told  the truth?   what kind of river could purify a dream?
Tomtoo

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5 posted 2008-01-16 01:28 AM


Ah, winter is the best time to dream and to write about it.
                              Ida

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6 posted 2008-01-16 12:03 PM


"Winter Dreams

Mid Winter's
shadows,
a radiant moon
of perfect clarity,
dances on this
mystic river… "

       Inhaled as a cold breath of air

"purifying our
dreams of
Spring!"

       Exhaled as tender April sun.

Transition of the seasons so well articulated ~ This write makes me homesick all over again.
      
TomMark, if this is the river I know, it is indeed mystic.

simon
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7 posted 2008-01-16 12:06 PM


really nice & pure......
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