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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-01-15 06:13 AM






*

When he is in love ...

*

he kisses her bare shoulders
and lets her lean onto him
to feel the butterflies within

he tickles her ears with his breath
and makes her collapse into him
to hear the brawl of his blood

he turns her face towards him
and lets her eyes gaze into his
to slice off the rest of the world

he puts his arms around her
and engages in the skin to skin touch
to start the slow dance in quick sand

he brushes his lips over her eyelids
and makes her swallow her words
to moan together the song of desire

he calls for the moon and the stars
and allows her to perform the starring role
to be dissolved and consumed by his fire
*

© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2008-01-15 06:18 AM


ms mar, now this is lovely work, enjoyed it
Kahlil
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2 posted 2008-01-15 09:08 AM


Beautiful, dear Margherita.
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2008-01-15 09:36 AM


Breathtaking!
A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2008-01-15 11:43 AM


WOO-WOO..this is hot!

I really liked it!

Passion looks good on you!

do you know this man? does he have a brother? lol!


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

TomMark
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5 posted 2008-01-15 11:48 AM


wow,wow,wow,

tell me the whole story!!!

wonderful.
TM

Bobby Jordan
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6 posted 2008-01-15 11:56 AM


Margherita,

The picture is beautiful.  Is this your work?

The poem is also beautiful, and goes very well with the picture.

This is truly excellent work.  I like it very much.

Youse da pro!

Bobby

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7 posted 2008-01-15 12:57 PM


WoW
the picture goes relly well with your piece of work, I ♥ the writing BEAUTIFUL =D

simon
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8 posted 2008-01-15 01:12 PM


sensual..... most people can't write about sex in English. You can.....
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9 posted 2008-01-15 01:51 PM


The picture is remarkable with the figures melding into one another.  Did the poem inspire the picture or vice versa?  In either case they make a perfect pair.  Joyce
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2008-01-15 03:13 PM


Yum...delicious...James
aziza
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11 posted 2008-01-16 12:42 PM


Pure beauty and love.
You swept me away.

A

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2008-01-16 03:45 AM


Oh, my, Margherita, your words put the 'love' in lovely!

This my dear, is aother I have been accumulating a library of your poetic works.

An avid fan,

Angelo Terrestre

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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13 posted 2008-01-16 04:11 AM


Margherita... this is devine!  loved every word of it... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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14 posted 2008-01-17 08:04 AM


Thank you all my dear Poet friends, you have made my day with your replies!

I could not find the author of this beautiful picture, though it resembles Picasso's blue period ... (it took me quite some time to find the perfect pic to accompany my words). I wish I could paint or draw like this!!

Brothers? This kind is rare, very rare, I fear!!

love
Margherita


SouthernJustice
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15 posted 2008-01-17 02:08 PM


wonderfully and beautufilly romantic. VERY much enjoyed.
secondhanddreampoet
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16 posted 2008-01-17 07:41 PM


wow!!

and  a "slow dance in quick sand(!!)"

applause!

Margherita
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17 posted 2008-01-18 08:32 PM


Thank you too dear SJ and dear Bruce for your generous comments.

with loving kindness
Margherita

rugged_miss
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18 posted 2008-01-30 05:53 PM


As you rightly said, "when he is in love....."
It's a beautiful feeling when you find it though. And you have a beautiful way of describing the whole feeling. The art was great too...

inkedgoddess
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19 posted 2008-01-30 08:24 PM


simply beautiful margherita
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