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xrobxscottx
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since 2008-01-15
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0 posted 2008-01-15 12:56 PM



Welcome to my world
Locked inside this little box
Welcome to my world
Where I am but a fox

Welcome to the hen house
Where it is I choose to feed
Welcome to the circumstance
On which you meet my need

Welcome to depression
Where lovers dis-unite
Welcome to the happiness
Where lovers love ignites

Welcome to my world
Where I can see it all
Welcome to my world
Now sit and watch me fall


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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2008-01-15 01:20 AM


Shew! your world has alot in it,
now if the falling is in love,
that would be nice to watch,
but falling as in loss,
well that would be sad.

Whichever one, just have someone there
to catch you!

Oh, and welcome to our world here at PIP!

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-01-15 10:50 AM


Welcome to our Pip world!

Welcome to depression
Where lovers dis-unite
Welcome to the happiness
Where lovers love ignites


There is enough then to fill a great number of books! Looking forward to more from you.

love
Margherita

Bobby Jordan
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since 2007-08-13
Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
3 posted 2008-01-15 10:54 AM


xrobxscottx,

Welcome to you.

Cute, try to avoid overuse of "W" words.

Bobby


xrobxscottx
Junior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 31
United States
4 posted 2008-01-15 11:32 AM


Thanks for the commentary in this poem guys!

Bobby, I appreciate that, and I will next time. But as for this poem that was the concept of it. I was using Alliteration to welcome you into the world of the person in the poem.

lol

I will post more tonight! I have to first get home and grab them, and then I can post them.

Clang
Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222

5 posted 2008-01-15 02:41 PM


Well done...and welcome!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
6 posted 2008-01-15 05:27 PM


welcome indeed!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2008-01-15 06:33 PM


Welcome! Hope fall-ing into Pipsland was a good move for you.
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