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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-01-14 06:16 AM



just in passing we were other rivers
with out sleeves touching
we both saw the sun side of heaven
but called it different names

you said I made you uncomfortable
with your eyes at times
because of your possession
and heart sound words of proper

but they always did look back
and your smile made you stronger
as you realized you were a window
and I didn't have any hands

and my eyes told you secrets too
how you made me feel uncomfortable
because of your possession
and heart sound words of proper

but I called it just an addiction


_____________

daark


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-01-14 06:19 AM


this one Mr Daark... hits my heart  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-01-14 06:28 AM


ms R & B..gently I hope,,,thanks babe for touching
Clang
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3 posted 2008-01-14 08:07 AM


Well done.
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4 posted 2008-01-14 08:29 AM


addiction for sure

enjoyed this

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-01-14 05:09 PM


friend clang, thank you much

____________

ms suesea, thanks lady friend..

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6 posted 2008-01-15 01:40 AM


Makes one wonder what all the uncomfortable is trying to hide.  

Know what I mean?

I love this.

A

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-01-15 06:19 AM


ms az, sometimes it is just hard
to let one's self do what one wants I guess..thanks ms

Margherita
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8 posted 2008-01-15 01:21 PM


and my eyes told you secrets too
how you made me feel uncomfortable
because of your possession
and heart sound words of proper

but I called it just an addiction


Sometimes it could be the sun side of heaven in the way the other understands it, couldn't it?
A question of self-confidence maybe too.

You always have a master touch to bring your message through.

love
Margherita

tonyV
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9 posted 2008-01-15 04:41 PM


This one made me smile.

Addiction, I hear ya...

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2008-01-15 06:27 PM


ms mar, thanks babe for touching this one

_________

tonyV, thanks my friend and welcome to the piprooms

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