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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-01-14 05:06 AM


Gone Like the Wind

Wanting to win her heart
I waited until the dawn
to hold her and kiss her
but she was gone,
gone like the wind.
So elequently, she
saved her best for me,
filling my heart
with desire,
hot as a fire
and leaving me
in anticipation
of the softness of her lips
and the sweetness of her kiss,
yet knowing within my heart
that someday soon
she would return.

JamesLee
12January
2008



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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-01-14 05:19 AM


and has she returned yet my sweet James? it must be getting close oui???  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Clang
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2 posted 2008-01-14 08:03 AM


Your's is a lucky girl.  Such romance in your soul.  I hope she returns to you soon.  Long distance relationships can be hard.  But with your devotion I can't imagine it won't succeed.
Margherita
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3 posted 2008-01-14 10:55 AM


The longing can be very sweet too, as I deduce also from your lovely words, dear James.

love
Margherita

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-01-14 12:59 PM


As they say, "Anticipation is half the fun!" ~ but I think the other half is much sweeter! lol

Love to you, Island Man!

Linda

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-01-14 03:54 PM


Thank you Roniece, Clang, Margherita and Earth Angel for the wonderful responses...
In less than a week I will be with my sweet...getting excited...James

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