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Frances The Mute
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since 2008-01-09
Posts 16
CT, USA

0 posted 2008-01-13 03:44 PM



Foolish, Wrong,
unwillingy to try,
thats all she is,

Judging, Lying,
forcing a faith,
thats all she does,

Weaknesses, Failings,
though never reflections,
thats all she sees,

Lies, Opinions,
always so adamant,
thats all she says,

Hatred, Fear,
refusal to know,
thats all she has.

Aware, Knowing,
striving for it,
thats all i am.

"There is a beast in man that needs to be excersised, not exorcised."

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2008-01-13 04:10 PM


Obviously interested in Sara...but perhaps shouldn't be, based on your own appraisal...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-01-16 04:35 AM


gosh I feel sorry for Sara ... I'm sure she has some goodness in her... expressed with anger I think... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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