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Thalen
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since 2007-12-15
Posts 35
New Jersey, USA

0 posted 2008-01-13 07:31 AM



This is a dedication to one of my best friends, who well... I'll let you read =D  

To Rae,
Klover

To Rae,
My sister whom I truly love
How I remember when we first met,
My eyes wide with my young age,
Who held my hand and led me on to wisdom,
But you, who shorter and smaller then I
Had so much heart and soul,

You helped me when I felt weak,
Led me onto courage and hope!
When all I could do for you,
Was shelter you from the rain
With my umbrella.

When I became lost in purpose
Stumbling in blind confusion
You called me by who I was,
A gentlemen, polite to the highest degree.

So to you my sister, I bid thanks
Though you are so far away,
May your journey be wonderful!
As I set out on mine.


© Copyright 2008 Kieran Thomas Maye - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-01-16 06:15 AM


a wonderful tribute! your sister will be proud!  enjoyed this sharing from you Thalen... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

simon
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since 2008-01-14
Posts 440
London, England
2 posted 2008-01-16 07:21 AM


This is really nice...

I agree a really moving tribute that does your sister proud...

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