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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-01-12 06:09 PM


Lady In Blue

As darkness falls
troubled thoughts
fade away into the blueness
of a silent cry.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2008-01-12 06:14 PM


Awwww, this is so sad. If talking helps, I am here. Anytime!
aziza
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2 posted 2008-01-13 07:11 PM


M

I have felt a similar cry well up in my own breast.  It finds release in words.

A

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Gaia
3 posted 2008-01-13 09:22 PM


It seems silent cries are the deepest, M.
Concise, fine cathartic write.
  

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2008-01-14 12:03 PM


Terrific! It happens just like that.

((((Maureen))))
love,
Margherita

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2008-01-15 06:40 AM


well, something's got to help

thank you for reading

M

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