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Thalen
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since 2007-12-15
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0 posted 2008-01-12 02:11 PM



To Rae,
Klover

To Rae,
My sister whom I truly love
How I remember when we first met,
My eyes wide with my young age,
Who held my hand and led me on to wisdom,
But you, who shorter and smaller then I
Had so much heart and soul,

You helped me when I felt weak,
Led me onto courage and hope!
When all I could do for you,
Was shelter you from the rain
With my umbrella.

When I became lost in purpose
Stumbling in blind confusion
You called me by who I was,
A gentlemen, polite to the highest degree.

So to you my sister, I bid thanks
Though you are so far away,
May your journey be wonderful!
As I set out on mine.


© Copyright 2008 Kieran Thomas Maye - All Rights Reserved
Clang
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since 2005-12-15
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1 posted 2008-01-12 02:45 PM


What a wonderful piece.  Sisters are special indeed.
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2008-01-12 02:46 PM


Awesome!
passing shadows
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3 posted 2008-01-13 10:18 AM


lovely tribute poem


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