navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #41 » Thoughts from Two Worlds(transcribed)
Open Poetry #41
Post A Reply Post New Topic Thoughts from Two Worlds(transcribed) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
dragoon
Junior Member
since 2008-01-09
Posts 19


0 posted 2008-01-11 02:02 PM



Its a Tolemyday and my friends are out
A warm and breezy Pegdonia night
Pegdonia's satellite the Androdome takes stage
Looking at the stars for some insight

I wonder if theres life out there
My telescope nearby I place to my eye
Piercing towards Cassiopiea, that blue dot I see
I wonder if someone is staring back at me.

Its Friday and my friends are out
A warm and breezy Earth night
Earths satellite the moon takes stage
Looking at the stars for some insight

I wonder if theres life out there
My telescope nearby I place to my eye
Piercing towards Pegasus, that green dot I see
I wonder if someone is staring back at me.

© Copyright 2008 dragoon - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
1 posted 2008-01-11 02:31 PM


this is a beautiful poem.
enjoyed the read and I like the style.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-01-12 01:45 PM


Nice write.
        Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-01-12 01:51 PM


I wonder if theres life out there
My telescope nearby I place to my eye
Piercing towards Pegasus, that green dot I see
I wonder if someone is staring back at me.


Wonderful and totally after my heart!

There is nothing more fascinating than to look through a telescope in a clear night ... even without telescope of course we can still be in total awe and ask those questions, but it is a big emotion to see the stars more clearly. I remember my goosebumps when I first saw Saturn's rings ...

love,
Margherita

dragoon
Junior Member
since 2008-01-09
Posts 19

4 posted 2008-01-12 10:19 PM


Thank you all. dragoon
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #41 » Thoughts from Two Worlds(transcribed)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary