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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-01-11 09:00 AM


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At an intersection
Beside old graves—
The light changes


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© Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Bob K
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1 posted 2008-01-11 11:11 AM


Dear Huan Yi,
  
         Love this.

          BobK.

TomMark
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2 posted 2008-01-11 01:29 PM


One Way lane
inside cemetery
a STOP sign

  

[This message has been edited by TomMark (01-11-2008 02:01 PM).]

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2008-01-11 03:49 PM


Nice...James
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4 posted 2008-01-11 03:58 PM


a great poetic image
really made me smile

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secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2008-01-13 09:08 AM


Unfortunately, I had previously missed this
(American) Zenesque gem!

very serious applause!!

passing shadows
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6 posted 2008-01-13 10:21 AM


*sigh*
secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2008-01-17 08:13 PM


I came back for another official 'read' of this effective Zen 'write!'

I hope more folks will find it more readily if it returns near the top of the 'P.I.P.-land' queue!

continuing appplause!!

Huan Yi
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8 posted 2008-01-17 09:46 PM


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Thank you all

Bruce,
you are dreaming
for this is a site
in which there is always
tomorrow.

Thank you all again,

John


secondhanddreampoet
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9 posted 2008-01-19 08:16 PM


me...dreaming?!...yes...always...
but, only 'secondhandedly!'

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2008-01-19 08:18 PM


I'm pleased Bruce 'bumped' this up again! wonderful write John... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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